We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Jayden you have included several interesting adjectives. You have given people's names in your recount capital letters. Great writing.
You have placed most of your capital letters and fullstops correctly. Well done.
To add more information in the middle part of your writing before you finish off.
To add exclamation marks to your writing when appropriate.